In this week, we presented our assignment ‘Narrative in Space’
I was chosen Taman Kaktus and i must make the signage. I make it like this
But it still has a lot of weakness. From the critique session, i got a lot of revision, there are :
- Try to use more cactus shapes
- Cactus have so many colors not only green
- Make the signage more proper
- Make the function more clearly
and another else. So, the point is I still need to improve 🙂 I hope I can make it better than before.
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